Nicky Laine
NLW Dark Match Talent
#GoWithTheFlow
Posts: 11
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Post by Nicky Laine on Jun 1, 2014 14:53:18 GMT -5
Hey guys, If anyone who read my RP, here, feels like sharing their thoughts and critique of it, please do so as I want to improve as a writer and make my RP's more enjoyable for readers. Let me know what you think of the concept as well, I thought it was kinda cool. No pun intended. Regards, Wayne.
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Post by "Cowboy" James Bullet on Jun 1, 2014 16:15:04 GMT -5
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Post by "High Velocity" Jason Cruze on Jun 1, 2014 16:58:24 GMT -5
You'll have to excuse him, Wayne. James doesn't know how to read or write so he just uses Emotes to convey his thoughts. Usually we figure that means "good job."
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Nicky Laine
NLW Dark Match Talent
#GoWithTheFlow
Posts: 11
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Post by Nicky Laine on Jun 1, 2014 17:13:52 GMT -5
Haha, I hope so! What'd you think Shawn? Be brutal.
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Post by "High Velocity" Jason Cruze on Jun 1, 2014 17:21:48 GMT -5
I'd have to thoroughly go through it. I haven't had that opportunity yet, but do you have Skype? If so, mind PMing it to me? Jackie and I wanted to talk to you about something. I'll check out your RP thoroughly after I finish my RP for another eFed I'm in.
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Post by Damien Acid on Jun 1, 2014 19:59:10 GMT -5
I enjoyed it.
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Nicky Laine
NLW Dark Match Talent
#GoWithTheFlow
Posts: 11
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Post by Nicky Laine on Jun 10, 2014 17:11:29 GMT -5
Hey again guys, Just posted The Cabin of Cool #2 yesterday and was wondering if anyone had any constructive criticism or feedback for me. I'm always keen to improve my RPs so anything would be appreciated! If you haven't got a chance to read it, check it out here: The Cabin of Cool #2. Thanks bro's!
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